Monday, January 04, 2010

200. Unusual Winter

You have left
a winter
on my trail
unlike any I have seen before!

each night
while the trees dance
in the cool silvery breeze
and shed
their crisp yellow leaves
you visit me

I shed
two strands of dreams
on your pillow
and a dozen inhibitions
in your bed

and at dawn
I find
a heap of star dust
in my backyard

while you toss
restlessly
in your sleep
each night
does your sky
shed
stars too?!

Is your winter
as unusual as mine?!

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Happy New Year!!
:-)

Anonymous said...

i think you are a terrific writer..i have read ur poems for the first time..

दीपशिखा वर्मा / DEEPSHIKHA VERMA said...

i luv your writings, the way you personify sweet stony emotions..you are angrezi ke gulzaar..same way of putting things- zindigi in athanni , saans me koi kaanch toota hai..n many other his abstruse but true lines..
keep writing ..want to know your name !

robaroo... said...

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sab to bahut ki achche achche complements diye hain par ek mai hi hun jo galiyan de raha hun
takecare yaar

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