you have a real story there
your pain is so real
it needs to be told
it needs to reach the world
you need to be out there
she was told
she stepped out
of her closet
and
wept her heart out in words
through mascara smears
and ink smudges
hmmm
I know I asked you
to keep it real
but your pain is
too dark
too drab
too depressing
too dressed down
could you give us
something with
more color,
less candor;
more curves,
less creases?
you know what I always advise
women
they should always
leave something
to the imagination
so work
on your emotional grammar
and dress it up a little
see if you could give us
something
more current
more 'now'
less in-the-face
you know what I mean
she was told
she walked out
and walked back
into her closet
she was better off
a private tragedy
than a public comedy
in contemporary syntax
your pain is so real
it needs to be told
it needs to reach the world
you need to be out there
she was told
she stepped out
of her closet
and
wept her heart out in words
through mascara smears
and ink smudges
hmmm
I know I asked you
to keep it real
but your pain is
too dark
too drab
too depressing
too dressed down
could you give us
something with
more color,
less candor;
more curves,
less creases?
you know what I always advise
women
they should always
leave something
to the imagination
so work
on your emotional grammar
and dress it up a little
see if you could give us
something
more current
more 'now'
less in-the-face
you know what I mean
she was told
she walked out
and walked back
into her closet
she was better off
a private tragedy
than a public comedy
in contemporary syntax