Sooni si raatein

Ok now this is a different attempt... someone I donno came up with the situation below n the song dat follow is written by me...

hi bhai log....bahut dino baad ayaa hoon..ek nayee situation k saath....lez c dum ataa hai ya nahi....
it consists of two scenes....
the first scene is .koi daakbangla hai..some hilly area.raat ka waqt....this boy is sittin alone in a room....age btwn 22-25...lights are switched off..ek table lamp jal raha hai...ladka table par hi sir jhukaaye baitha hai...writin somethin...then he relaxes in the chair...apne haath se baal peechay karta hai....table se lagi hui khidki k baahar dekhta hai...but its winter night...and its unclear outside...he lifts himself up frm the chair....searches for something...and finds nothin on his desk...then searches for somethin in his kurta's pocket...and finds a ciggrt pakt...smiles....then looks for lighter..fumbles in the drawer...finds nothin....hits the table with his fist...and says...."badluk....badluk..."
rises suddenly.....and plays a song...voice of beghum akhtar fills the cold air of the room...ghazal plays"dekh to dil ki jaan se uth ta hai..yeh dhuan sa kahaan se uth ta hai...."..boy strolls to the balcony...looks down in the street...neechay aag jal rahee hai...koi baitha hua bhi hai...ladkay ki aankhon mein chamak dekhi jaa saktee hai..he puts his jacket on....and goes out....the ghazalis still playyin...

2nd scene:
boy reaches the fire place..ek boodha baitha hua hai wahaan..chaukidar hai ...he is smokin...ladka wahaan pahunchta hai..chaukidaar..chashme ke pechay se use dekhta hai...aur muskurata hai...kursi se uth jata hai...kursi charmaraatee hai....shayad chaukidar ki haddiyaan bhi...par sunayee nahi padhtee...
chaukidaar:kaahe bhaiya....aaj fir neend nahi aa rahee ?
boy:(shrugs his shoulders and smiles...)neend kya daddu....aap ki yaad kheench latee hai... neechay...h ehe he..
chaukidar:badhiya hai....yahi umar hai chaukidar aur kutto ko yaad rakhne ki ...badhiya hai..(boy grins again..)
chaukidar gives him a matchbox...boy lits his ciggrt...and sits beside the fire...
chaukidar: haan bhaiya....ab batao...kaa karat rahel ba itni raat ? ehaan to jaade se haadh kaampe jaate hain...
boy:kuch nahi ....daddu...chithi likh rahe the..tum kaho to tumhaare liye bhi likh dein...amma ko?he he he...(boy winks and laughs)...
chaukidar:thitholi....humse...are koi ghar par hoti to hum nahi aate yahaan sahar maa..tumhaara biyaah ho gaya bhaiya?
boy:kahaan daddu....hum bhi tumhaare jaise hi hain....dekho itna padh kar bhi kya fayda...hum bhi aap ke saath hi baith te hain..biyaah bhi nahi hua..h ehhee...
chaukidar: are to tumhaaree kaun umar ho gayee...ho jayegaa...bol do mathaarii (mother)se.
karay dengi jhat se...
boy:(thinking)....aise kahaan hota hai daddu...thitholi ki baat aur hai....
(ghazal jo upar kamre mein chal rahee hai..uski awaaz suni jaa saktee hai...)
chaukidar:ee kaaun ganaa hai....koi mujra-ujra hai kaa...hum jab ladka rahe to gaon mein saadi biyaah mein atee thee ganaa wali....tab sune rahe....aisa hi kuch farsi mein gaat rahee sasuree...he hehe...(chaukidaar ki aankhon mein ladak pan ki kuch shararatein timtima gayeen..jo shayad usne ki hoon par bolta nahi ho....al of his red,tobacco spoiled teeth are visible.....)
boy:kya baat hai daddu....yeh shauk bhi farmaate the....wais ye mujra nahi...ghazal hai...khair aap choro....aap k liye mujra hi sahi...acha ye batao ....chai ka kuch intezaam hai...?
chaukidar: haan hai naa...laate hain....uth kar jataa hai...
boy:dekh kar....aur chai hi lanaa.....desi mat utha lana ..he ehhe...
chaukidar leaves and boy smokes....dhuen ke challe bante hain aur aag ke dhuen k saath mil jaate hain..
chaukidar ..returns...with a cup of tea...ladka le leta hai....
boy:to daddu ...ghar par maan kab tak rahee...
chaukidar: bahut chota raha hum....tab hi chal basee...bahut maar khatee the huamaraa baap se...
boy:hmmmm....tum bachaate nahi the?
chaukidar:are kaha naa..bahut chote rahe hum...tuhaar mthaaree ka jaane kaisa hiya hai....itni pyaree batein karte ho...kaaise chor deti hai tumhe?
boy:ab hogee to chodegee naa daddu....
chaukidar:hey ram....etna umar mein maa nahi rahee?kaa baat kar rahe ho?
boy:haan dadu....khatam ho gayee....
chaukidar:ch ...ch...ch...bahut kharaab baat hai...tab hi aisee umar se badi baat karte ho..
boy:(a bit sad.....yet smiling...)aisa?theek hai ab bache jaisa baat kareingay...
chaukidar:kab khatm ho gayeen...
boy:ho gayee bas...ab kab hui ...is kaa kya karein....aise hi khatm ho jatee hain maayein ....apne ladko ki shaadi k sapne dekhte hue....unke marne ka koi wqt nahi hota daddu....
chaukidar:(puzzled.....scratches his head...)pata nahi kaa bol rahe ho...(beedi jalataa hai)
boy:(stands up....starts walkin....)chaloon dadda ..ab neend aa rahee hai..
chaukidar is in his deep thots...dun lstens...
boy comes to his room.....and reads a letter ....shayad us ki maan ka letter hai...tries to luk again out of the window..but there is fog again....
now i want the lyricst to write a song for this boy.....and his solitude...
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And this is what I wrote:

Sooni si raatein hain saja de koi
Beeti jo baatein hai bujha de koi

Koi aake
Aankh bhar de
Aaj kar de itna to zara…
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dheemi aanch pe zindagi chadhake
har raat peete hain pyale do pyale
raatein guzaare dhuaan udake
lagte nahin aankhon pe taale

dhundhule shab hain adhkhule lab hain
bade beraham hain yeh sab besabab hain

pyaale me phir pyaas bharna nahin hai

Koi aake
Aankh bhar de
Aaj kar de itna to zara…
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Awaaz dete bhi hain ham agar to
aasmaan ke us paar jaati nahin hai
peeli si khat ka jawaab dene ko
khamoshiyaan likhi jaati nahin hai

kitne sawaal aankhon me pale hain
baaton me gumraah karne chale hain

usi raah me phir thaharna nahin hai

Koi aake
Aankh bhar de
Aaj kar de itna to zara…
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